Nice content but as earlier posts have stated tell a story also set markers on your music and get your transitions to switch on the beat to smoother audio/picture matching 2017 Showreel this should demonstrate what am getting at
I am open to constructive criticism on this video.
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Too long, a promotional video solid not be any longer than 60 seconds. After that the shots look repetitive and you loose your audience. The shots looked great. Good use of dynamic movement. (having the drone fly over and past the boat) nice mixture of shots too. 'just remember shorter' 80% of YouTube video viewers have clicked out of a video at just 15 seconds...
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Beautiful!! What's your camera and setup. Looks like 5k or a very good 4K job!Shot with an I2 with various lenses for a local charter company. We have lots of water everywhere
Edit, a couple of the clips were taken with an Inspire 1 Pro.
The only comment I have is that beutiful shot of the sunset with the light house was verry nice but It should be the last shot with the company information super imposed over the shot. The last 2 clips at the end was not needed.
Bri Guy, out of sheer curiousity, I have to know how you knew which footage was I-2 vs. I-1Pro?Is this a "bait fishing" charter boat?? (they couldn't catch any fish to film)?.
(pretty weak display for the potential customer).
Your I1 footage looks better than your I2 footage
If you're going to do the "top/bottom thing" then go with 13% top & bottom, (or don't do it at all
Totally agree, put the sunset with lighthouse at the end, and maybe cut out the additional footage of the lighthouse (shortens it up and more room for relevant footage).
I do this professionally and have an "eye" for this this stuff, especially since all I do is edit my freeking *** off, (sucks, I just missed another beautiful weekend)
Wow, I had to come back when I saw you were on page.
I'm envious on how you respond to your critiques, very professional and as good as your footage !!
Thanks for that, none of us know everything and we all need help seeing where we are lacking. I see my weakness's and try to better myself when I can. Maybe I can help you with some of your replies to some people
I am pleasantly surprised by your respectful comment here. Life is short and this is not a practice round!
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Wish I had your eye for that! Very impressive! Again, was just curious... Remind me to never let u critique my videos, LOL, nothing like OP, so not even gonna try!
Don't be silly, post away.
My first stuff was as shitty as it comes, and I didn't have the benefit of forums like this to help me out
Don't be silly, post away.
My first stuff was as shitty as it comes, and I didn't have the benefit of forums like this to help me out
I would like you to pick out the clips (by the second mark) that were taken with the Inspire 1 and I will tell you how good your eye is.
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